I'm really surprised where this poem took me. I incorporated not only the imagery from "every time i look back", but also the science images from Ricky's take on "light the fire".
every time i look back v1
They say
light is faster
than any thing
faster than bird flight
(your flight)
faster than sound
(your footsteps receding)
faster than wind
(your hair whipping your face
that day at Monterey)
They say
light is faster
than any thing
that by the time
I turned to
see your beautiful
back, shapely winged scapulas
tapering to a graceful
violin waist broadening to
a sensuous hip you laughingly
called, "birthing hips", the
ones that were to birth
nothing but escapes
They say
light is faster
than any thing
that by the time
I caught glimpse of
your fleeting retreating
it was not you, but a
fleeting photonic memory
of a shape once you.
They say
light is faster
than any thing.
Faster than your leaving.
Faster than my inaction.
Faster, my love, than culpability.
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