I've had trouble with this one for a while. I wrote it probably two years ago and though I like the concept and the basic way I've worded it, I'm not terribly thrilled by it. It just feels clunky to me.--Susan, 20 Jul 06

Turning orig

Turning v1 RF, RFRY, 22 Jul 06

I definitely took this and did my own thing. Lengthened, changed, made into more explicit story kept it quite a bit more concrete than I thought I would, perhaps as I feel it serves the overall quiet disconnectedness of the tone. Definitely played up all the things that could do turning. (But not milk turning bad. Damn. A missed oppotunity.) Anyway, enjoy. --RFRY