This is my most recent of poems- an attempt to add some sad humor into my poetry. I kind of like it, but it feels sporadic- which is partially intended and partially the result of poor writing. I think it needs more meat and I'm curious to see where others might take it.

To my always never lover v1 Christina 05.31.06

To my always never lover RFv1, RFRY, 09 Jun 06

         -- I had a lot of fun working on this one. Dense with much good usable imagery. I think I found something linking the images/moments together (maybe). My version's certainly more dramatic, because that's what I do. It looses some of the playful quality which I liked from the original.