The Great Wave off Kanagawa (Katsushika Hokusai, 1831)
You've got a Hokusai tattooed and
floating borderless on your back: a wave
framed gently only by the shadows
of your shoulder blades. I watch you
by our yellowing light
as you bend to retrieve a cup.
The skin at your waist folds
and your breasts fall forward,
your stomach that I've never noticed hangs—
The wave threatens to roll right off your back.
To wash down onto our cluttered floor:
your books, a calculator, plastic this and
plastic that. You stand and
turn to me,
still half exposed, walk,
your calves stretched slim,
your ankles as buttons protruding, unlevel.
Soon, our yellowing light will switch off
and in the darkness— our windows foiled against the sun
and bracing out the moon—
with your breathing deep and soft, I will
have forgotten, for with the light extinguished,
I no longer know you.
--RFRY, written Fall 2004
I'm not opening this up for exploration in the same way as the others, but it's an idea of the level of polish/density I'm going for.
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