Near Fourth and Fourth

--RFRY, 06 Aug 06

v2 is far better than v1, which should really be thought of, now, perhaps, as 'synthesized attempts,' that is, attempts which stitched together into the poem. v2 is far tighter, far more focused and far better for it, I think.--RFRY

Near Fourth and Fourth attempts

Near Fourth and Fourth v1

Near Fourth and Fourth v2