I don't know if what I meant is conveyed. Oddly enough I see this as a reconciliation poem. I say 'oddly' because usually my poems are about some aspect of loss and then being bitter and cynical. :-) So yay for me writing something about reconciliation! Anyway. Not sure if it's conveyed in the poem. I really liked writing this one, so I have quite a few attempts on the last stanza, which you'll see.

~ Susan 07 Aug 06

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